(a.k.a. Substantive Editing)
Cohesion · Coherence · Concision · Organization · Flow · Sentence Structure · Tone · Inclusivity · Style · Fact-checking · Clarity · Consistency · Clichés · Word Choice · Dialogue
Published Line-Edited Books and Stories
Wired for Success, by 6-figure business owner Edmond Abramyan
Oak and Ivy, by Rebekah Isert
"Too Close to the Son" (published in Leading Edge, issue 76)
Line-Edited Articles and Blog Posts
“Backsliding and Bad Faith: Aspiration, Disavowal, and (Residual) Practical Identities,” by Justin F. White
"Inspiring Others with Your Identity," by Alohilani Jacob
"Finding Comfort in Times of Sorrow," by Cecilia Oaks
"Forgiving the Wayward: Finding Peace," by Cecilia Oaks
"Becoming a Missionary without a Nametag," by Payton Pingree
"Spiritual Wonder in a Stressful World," by Megan Whiting
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